My Classmate's Hobby

            Sih Wahyundari is my classmate who has lot of hobbies. They are watching,cooking,listening to the music and swimming. And the most hobby that she likes watching Korean drama, especially City Hunter and Boys Before Flower. Because she likes the story and there is Lee Min Hoo as her favourite idol. It can make her relaxed for awhile.Then, she likes to collect all about Korea such as pictures of Lee Min Hoo. That is short story about my classmate's hobby. 

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# purple: is the topic

# orange : is CI

# underline : is topic sentence

The Korean Cultures

          The most memorable experience which I  ever had is when I saw Korean culture in University of Indonesia.In fact, Korea has a large assortment of traditional culture.Such as traditional dances, beautiful costumes, and even the typical delicacies. In addition, in Korea there are many beautiful places of culture such as Janggeum Temples and royal palaces which are usually visited by tourism. And, "hanbook" is the name of Korean custom which has the interesting colours. All of all,Indonesia as a nation we have to preserve their own culture as well as the Korean nation.

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blue : topic

red  :controling idea 

The most memorable experience is when I saw the Korean culture in University of Indonesia : topic sentence.